1. Rating Rate the paper in the following categories (For each category, choose a one numeric rating) Overall grade (overall, how do you rate this summary paper?) 3: Good Language (how fluent is the language, did you understand what this paper is saying?) 4: Very good Technical quality 5: Contents are completely correct. There are no errors. It corresponds information on the source material. Editorial quality 3: Understandable with some effort, several improvements suggested below Confidence (how confident are you about this review?) 1: This is a completely new subject to me; I made educated guesses 2. Detailed comments Currently, protocols are explained and some advantages are mentioned, but it would also be good to explain disadvantages of protocols. Advantages and situations for which protocols are suitable for could also be explained in more detail. Now, it's difficult to know strenghts and weaknesses of different protocols. More figures about different routing protocols would make it easier for the reader to understand how protocols work. Some parts of the text were a bit confusing, for example: Chapter 2.1. "by issuing a TREE-CREATE to all" should be e.g. "by issuing a TREE-CREATE message to all", similar errors were also present in that chapter and in some other chapters. Figures should be explained explicitly and in more detail. Like what different lines mean, what are S, I and D nodes in Figure 1. Margins could be a bit smaller, now they take about half of the page in horizontal direction.